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.:Reluctance:. by *rio-armare:iconrio-armare:

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Oh how I love to use toner. It is positievly a gorgeous thing to paste them upon a page and know that it's worth spending three bucks a sheet because I think it looks just so awsome, and saves so much time. Then, I also adore everything about this picture anyway. I love their expressions, I like Eric's hands, I like their hair... You get the idea.

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Angel found himself halted by the wall behind him. He didn't want any more of Eric's kisses. He didn't want any more of Eric. Yet time and time again Angel found himself the victim of Eric's hungry eyes. When he felt those eyes rake him over he knew that there was nowhere he might run he avoid being eaten.

Eric's hands encompassed him, and Angel almost could not stand. He tore his thoughts away, his face away mentally pleading to be let go. Please let me go. Even if his thoughts were audible, Eric would never relent. So Angel went unwillingly, reluctantly to a kiss that burned him up inside.

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~fashion-tragedy May 7, 2005, 9:23:22 AM
The picture looks like it's still moving . .

He looks like he is comtemplating something in his mind . .
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~yakedo May 7, 2005, 9:24:16 AM
they eyes are awesome!

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is this the desert and do you sell camels?
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*rio-armare May 7, 2005, 9:53:08 AM
I'm so glad that you see the movment. and, indeed, they both have quite a bit on thier mind. :giggle:
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~tenshi-ryu May 7, 2005, 12:11:00 PM
I like this one! ^^ Toner is so cool, I wish I had some....
Although Angel's eyes look like there staring off into space...I dunno it's probably just me...^^; ignore me once again please XD

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~yakedo May 8, 2005, 2:21:40 PM
heh, no problem. i've tried really ornate, pretty eyes like that before... i always mess them up. so i've learnt to stick to my normal blah eyes. hehe

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is this the desert and do you sell camels?
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~ScatterbrainFox May 9, 2005, 6:54:35 AM
Interesting and quite unique style, great expression!
The hands are already pretty good, but still the fingers look a bit too lumpy. Try defining the knuckles a bit more in the oulines. The hand behind angel's head also looks a bit weird, the thumb should be a bit more "inside" of the hand and pointing towards the viewer, not upwards. Th rest of the fingers looks a bit too "aranged", try to look at your own hand from this perspective while holding it in a relaxed manner, you should see what I mean then :)
Angel's ear is quite small, you should make it at least a bit bigger. His front hair also looks a bit awkward in relation to the soft, light strokes.

still a very nice picture, keep up the good work ;)

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*rio-armare May 9, 2005, 7:02:14 AM
I see what you mean about the hands being 'lumpy'... hmm... i'll have to work on that. Yes. yes, I'm always working on hands, they give me trouble... Thank you so much for the considerate review. :thanks: I will be able to concentrate my efforts on improving the things you've mentioned. :w00t:
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~ScatterbrainFox May 9, 2005, 7:03:49 AM
you're welcome and yes, nver stop working, especially not at the hands! that's the spirit! :shakefist: xD

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